SlayedForTheGod 665 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Felt like doing some self promo Check out my soundcloud for all my original tracks. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloody hooker 6,445 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 This is amazing! I really love the instrumental and the bridge. Edit: I just went through the rest of your tracks and I'm slayed This mutual gaze was a “longing to touch” or a "pre-coitus" stare. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GagasFilthyPop 336 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 I love this. It's catchy and has the potential to be a summer smash. "We could be caught, we're both convicted criminals of thought." Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moreck 15 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 It's pretty cute and catchy, but you need to work a lot on your diction when you sing. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlayedForTheGod 665 Posted July 6, 2016 Author Share Posted July 6, 2016 4 hours ago, Bloody hooker said: This is amazing! I really love the instrumental and the bridge. Edit: I just went through the rest of your tracks and I'm slayed Thank you! I cant take credit for the instrumental but i am responsible for everything else lol. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlayedForTheGod 665 Posted July 6, 2016 Author Share Posted July 6, 2016 4 hours ago, GagasFilthyPop said: I love this. It's catchy and has the potential to be a summer smash. awe thanks! lol idk about summer smash. this song is actually like 2 years old now i think. i really pride myself in trying to write a song that sounds realistic. like i feel like you could actually hear this on the radio Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlayedForTheGod 665 Posted July 6, 2016 Author Share Posted July 6, 2016 4 hours ago, Moreck said: It's pretty cute and catchy, but you need to work a lot on your diction when you sing. hm really? i went back and listened again but didnt really notice any spots where my diction and pronunciation where bad. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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