Kermit 15,807 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 I'll upload the full if people don't find this too bad. “For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.” ― Jean Dubuffet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaney 5,515 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 I wouldn't be buying LG5 if it sounded like that. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kermit 15,807 Posted June 16, 2016 Author Share Posted June 16, 2016 1 minute ago, Bae said: I wouldn't be buying LG5 if it sounded like that. Oh, I guess it's bad then. #IWillTryHarderNextTime “For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.” ― Jean Dubuffet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCAR 97 1,038 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 im boppin' Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
estxkid 872 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 6 minutes ago, DominicB said: Oh, I guess it's bad then. #IWillTryHarderNextTime Nooo, it's really great! But it lacks something.. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kermit 15,807 Posted June 16, 2016 Author Share Posted June 16, 2016 1 minute ago, universemiller said: Nooo, it's really great! But it lacks something.. I thought so too. I can't figure out what... “For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.” ― Jean Dubuffet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaney 5,515 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 9 minutes ago, DominicB said: Oh, I guess it's bad then. #IWillTryHarderNextTime I mean the sound is good, i don't mind it. Its just like, theres no chord progression and is kind of boring. Sorry for the harsh response. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kermit 15,807 Posted June 16, 2016 Author Share Posted June 16, 2016 Just now, Bae said: I mean the sound is good, i don't mind it. Its just like, theres no chord progression and is kind of boring. Sorry for the harsh response. I can handle constructive or somewhat destructive criticism. Thank you for the feedback. “For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.” ― Jean Dubuffet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
estxkid 872 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 Just now, DominicB said: I thought so too. I can't figure out what... you can try making leads more toned down and put brass/saxophones whatever these are on the front, make them louder? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RebeldeFaith 5,495 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 I like it!!! Somehow it reminds me a bit of Daft Punk's Interstella 5555. Although I don't think this would be completely the sound she'll do, I think is close. I want to listen to the full song though. Can I vanish into a cheeseburger pizza? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCAR 97 1,038 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 I can imagine this sound more on the Chic album, only time will tell! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicogly 2,579 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 YAAASSSS this is good. Not the sound I want for LG5 but I mean this demo is amaaazing, do a full one, I am thrilled. Great job bro!!! Rock On and A Last One For the Road 🚬 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamsenigma 9,520 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 Like they said above, this lack of chords progression, that's what I tried to say the other day kgdgj anyways, I know that this will be a timeless bop whenever it's finished. u rock bitch Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ItsTommyBitch 12,640 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 The lack of chord changes makes it seem like it doesn't really go anywhere, even if you have lots of interesting things happening in a timely manner. You don't even have to do any sort of massive modulations really to make this infinitely better, just some kind of general progression. Even a basic pop one would be fine I think, it just needs some form of tension and resolution. I love the actual sound and the instrumentation though! The interesting parts could be a little bit less in the background when they do happen if that makes sense??? The pulsing part that runs throughout the entire instrumental seems a bit strong at times when it sounds like you wanted something else to emerge; its all about balance. That's just my opinion, you could've intended for them to be that way, especially with this being a concept instrumental, the balance might be just right with presumably vocals over them. Overall I really like it though 私自身もこの世の中も誰もかれもが, どんなに華やかな人生でも, どんなに悲惨な人生でも, いつかは変貌し, 破壊され、消滅してしまう. すべてがもともとこの世に存在しない一瞬の幻想なのだから Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoeslay 4,182 Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 The ONLY issue is lack of chord progression but aside from that I actually love this Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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