Kermit 15,807 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 “For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.” ― Jean Dubuffet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kulture Kiari 3,433 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 Not a fan of it, but still good job. The best I can do in editing a sound piece is repeating a word over and over again. So keep up the good job man. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chase 407 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 instrumental shadows over the vocals way too much. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haroon 49,685 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 Moved to Gaga Media :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Die 1,864 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 Another good attempt. Nod if you wanna make love with the enemy. ❤ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kermit 15,807 Posted June 16, 2015 Author Share Posted June 16, 2015 Another good attempt. you guys need to give me a break jeesh “For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.” ― Jean Dubuffet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick1495 991 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 you guys need to give me a break jeesh Im sure he didn't mean his message in a bad way. if you want to improve your skill you've got take criticism constructively. Im not saying it was bad or anything. It better than anything i could have made Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delete 258 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 Hey there! Honestly I think that the instrumental in the verses over shadow the vocals quite a bit. Plus it doesn't seem to mesh well. Same for the "it's not that I don't want love but I really tried" When you have the electric guitar looping are you using the actual chords of the song? On on a positive note I think the elements you added to the Chorus sound great. It maybe needs a little tightening up but its undoubtedly the best part of this production. I really think you should consider mediating on it a little more, organically make some revisions and re post. Im telling you I'd download it in a heart beat for the chorus. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chromatislaps 34,792 Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 I love the chords of the instrumental. The overall instrumental feels to repetitive maybe some variation/chord changes, additional melodies, lost notes here and there, play some with filtering the frequencies of both the instrumental and the acapella.. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yepiz92 127 Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 I love this!, it feels off at some moments but overall I like it! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ARTPOPSlays Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 This is beutiful and interesting!! The instrumental overshadowing the vocals actually give it a cool touch! It's like this cool feeling I can't really describe lol great job!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChicaSkas 22,411 Posted June 24, 2015 Share Posted June 24, 2015 downloaded! Do YOU own the 4' by 6' Perfect Illusion promo Poster? Will pay you for it. Pic: http://i.imgur.com/UWuzumk Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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