Serendipity 7,821 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 In what started as a pleasant dream, this poet vanquished words like “duodenum" with ease. At 30 seconds, however, a six-letter word really gets him going. Powerful, right? If you don't have time for the video, but still want to hear Marshal Davis Jones' stunning words, he also provided a text version of the poem: last nightI had the most interesting dream.in itI was six years oldin a national spelling bee.geniuscomplex words….duodenum….serendipity.....floccinaucinihilipilification.up until the final roundone word between me and victorythe spell master clears his throatyoung man your word is fatherthe crowd began to chatter amongst themselvesseemingly displeasedat the simplicity of this final wordI searched for those eyesthose eyes that say"every things going to be ok. just do it"I dazed offyoung man!your word is fatherI stood up straight, licked my lips and beganfather, m-o-t-h-e-r, father…the spell master looks at me,down at his flash card,back up at me"sorry but you are incorrect"I don't understandmy fathers sitting right in the audience"excuse me?'"I am sorry son but you are incorrect"well thenyou can save your sorry apologiesbecause you must mean "in-correct"as in within the parameters of being right.let me explain something to youcuz obviously you aint grow upwhere poppas are rolling stonesdown the hills of women's backsidesand when he's goneall he's left uswas alonewhere minstrel men stroll around on bikeswhile fathers balanced their menstrual,2 jobs,2 kidsand a lifeon a unicycleand it looks something like this:breastfeeding on one armphone on the shouldercooking with the other armcleaning with one legtying sneakers with their teethyoung fatherswho make mistakesbecause we are not all perfectbut the one mistake they never makeis abandoning their seedsyou see fathersare master gardenersthey tend to every leafremoving the weedsplacing us in the windows of opportunityso that we can lean towards the sunand never forget that the sky is the limitplanting kisses on our cheekshugs on our backsgrowing their love on usthe best way they know howlike my fathermy father, sacrificed owning nothing,that I may have everythingmy father, walked a daily nightmareso that I may live out my dreamsmy father watered mewith blood sweat and tearsso that I may be ripefor the harvestand I hope that one dayI can grow up to be as great a fatheras she was for meyou did not ask me spell deadbeat sir...but if you want dead beat here it is:f-a-t-h-e-r, d-a-d, d-a-d-d-y, p-o-pp-o-p-s, if you want the slangyou asked me to spell fatherand father is,always has beenand always will be spelledm-o-t-h-e-rso get your encyclopedias,show me your flash cardsopen your dictionarycuz what webster saysmeans nothing around herearound here,my father is sitting right there...and I love her. See talent here-->http://bit.ly/2eqeUxK Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gagzus 24,190 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 is he saying he's been raised by his mother all his life, because i thought this was gonna say his father was transgender Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jester 6,388 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 *waiting for gender equality activists to lose their **** * Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KyliesChild 16,907 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 Immculate. Strong words by this man. Especially how a lot of men leave their children and their mothers are the one nurturing them nowadays and how men do not show (or at least some) men do not appreciate the significance a mother is. Many fathers, (not to be rascist but mostly black fathers) leave their children alone. This shows how a mother can mean so much more than your mother, but your father, uncle, aunt, even your mentor, your everything. Fathers who abandon their children are sick. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity 7,821 Posted April 10, 2015 Author Share Posted April 10, 2015 Immaculate. Strong words by this man. Especially how a lot of men leave their children and their mothers are the one nurturing them nowadays and how men do not show (or at least some) men do not appreciate the significance a mother is. Many fathers, (not to be racist but mostly black fathers) leave their children alone. This shows how a mother can mean so much more than your mother, but your father, uncle, aunt, even your mentor, your everything. Fathers who abandon their children are sick.thisif you can't be there for your children better not birth them See talent here-->http://bit.ly/2eqeUxK Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainingOnMe 7,280 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 *waiting for gender equality activists to lose their **** * tumblr's coming Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
doveve 526 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 Ok, he only had his mother to raise him, but there is a word 'father' in English language so please spell it and then express your opinion about fathers who do not raise their kids. This is a bit stupid imo. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haroon 49,685 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 Sorry I'm really confused He was asked to spell "father" but decided not to because what he's experienced in his life? I don't really see what relevance his experience in the past has to the spelling bee, but if he's happier taking the opportunity to give thanks to his mother than win the competition then okay Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Computer 10,980 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 There is no spelling bee, right? It's just him telling his dream? It's interesting though, thanks for sharing. 💚💛💕❣⭕💢💢 | ⓜⓔⓡⓡⓨ ©ⓗⓡⓘⓢⓣⓜⓐⓢ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayer 9,227 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 That's a beautiful poem. So well-written and so true. My dad's first wife left him with two daughters to raise, and he had to give up his own dreams to give them security and a decent childhood. He was a mother and a father to them. The dictionary definitions of what a parent actually is, just don't cut it. I love judas SO MUCH but I canʹt look like a copycat of JLO!!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity 7,821 Posted April 10, 2015 Author Share Posted April 10, 2015 That's a beautiful poem. So well-written and so true. My dad's first wife left him with two daughters to raise, and he had to give up his own dreams to give them security and a decent childhood. He was a mother and a father to them. The dictionary definitions of what a parent actually is, just don't cut it. so sad See talent here-->http://bit.ly/2eqeUxK Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bebe 17,289 Posted April 11, 2015 Share Posted April 11, 2015 I don't particularly like this video, I get it, but it doesn't feel authentic for me. He was raised by his M-O-T-H-E-R. I get that in many ways she played both roles, she was the parent but she wasn't the father. The person sitting in the audience was his mother. I just think there are better ways to get across that he doesn't have a father, that the definition of a parent is beyond what many dictionaries describe. Imo there are better ways to highlight the respect his mother deserves for raising him single-handed and balancing her life for him.It just rubs me the wrong way. I just have this visceral reaction against it, it's like throwing the word father around to describe her is disrespectful. The title of "Mother" seems to be fitting already, it already encomposses everything in itself. The idea that "Father" has to be thrown in there is to embolden the idea that a father is needed. For me a mother was enough. For others two mother's work perfectly. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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