night

[ultraviolent 0]

 the sun had secrets of it's own

 

the things it'd saw prior to the moon

 

and when dawn crept up

 

it'd bellowed and wept

 

to the harshest of acts 

 

that the night had kept

 

 

 

 

 

thoughts?

[Wet Fire 5,789]

I like it. Especially the atmosphere. You should've posted it in Conversation Area or 'The Gypsy Tea Room' thread in Blogs and Dedications in Community Center. :)