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Hey guys, I'm looking for someone to create a new version of MJH, very similar to the version Lum created, but with a few variations:

 

-Most of the song is from the studio version

-Include Intro from the demo, plus the sound of the lighter/match from the studio version

-Include "Make deals with every devil in sight" from the demo

-Use "Lady of the 'dam" instead of "I need to respond/respawn"

-Include ad libs from the demo at the end of the song (When she says "I think we'd have a good time!" and all that in the background)

-Include outtro from the demo

 

 

I like how the vocals sound wonky in the beginning of the demo, but I'm not too crazy about the "I need to respond/respawn" part. Keep the wonky vocals if you can, and just switch "I need to respond/respawn" for "Lady of the 'dam," but it might sound weird and you might need to keep the whole first verse from the studio version. "Make deals with every devil in sight" from the demo definitely has to be in there, though!

 

I never cared much for MJH, but with these edits, I think it can be one of the best off of ARTPOP. Thanks to anyone who can help!

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djBuffoon

with these edits, I think it can be one of the best off of ARTPOP.

It's already one of the best.

 

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Anomaly

It's already one of the best.

 

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In your opinion, bew. :reductive:

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