Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Please bear in mind that it's the first song that I've ever written and I wrote it in literally 4 minutes. I know it's probably really bad but :( :cry: Please look - https://soundcloud.com/lgmr-1/you You. I can't imagine my life, Without all of these things. Do you think I can live, When the phone still rings. And it's always you, Yeah, it's always you You're old news and I don't really care anymore Yeah, You say love me, then you don't What a ****ing bore. I don't wanna be a secret, Can't live a lie. You say you can't do it, Why don't you just try? And it's never you, No, it's never you. You're old news and I don't really care anymore Yeah, You say love me, then you don't What a ****ing bore. I handed you my whole life on a silver platter. I shine brighter than you, You hate it, you hate me. What does it matter? I promise your life will be, better than ever. Please make up your mind, You know I won't be here forever. You're old news and I don't really care anymore Yeah, You say love me, then you don't What a ****ing bore. Never forever, Never forever. Thoughts? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
barnabesk 1,230 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Do you have some kind of melody in your mind while singing it? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Share Posted March 23, 2013 Do you have some kind of melody in your mind while singing it? Yes. I know the melody exactly but i'm not a very good singer haha. :confuse: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Didymus 33,500 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 It's about you being in love and your partner wants to keep you a secret, right? He/she doesn't want to tell anyone he/she's dating you? Anyway, I quite like it. I can't really imagine what it would sound like though. Video? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael 533 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 I like it. I don't know but I'm imaging it to the melody of David Bowie's 'Heroes'. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
barnabesk 1,230 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Yes. I know the melody exactly but i'm not a very good singer haha. :confuse: You could try :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Share Posted March 23, 2013 It's about you being in love and your partner wants to keep you a secret, right? He/she doesn't want to tell anyone he/she's dating you? Anyway, I quite like it. I can't really imagine what it would sound like though. Video? Yeah. I wrote it about a conversation I had 10 minutes ago. I just felt like writing. Initially I was writing a poem. I then subconsciously started to turn it into a song. I'm a really bad singer. Especially acapella Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Didymus 33,500 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Yeah. I wrote it about a conversation I had 10 minutes ago. I just felt like writing. Initially I was writing a poem. I then subconsciously started to turn it into a song. I'm proud of you for actually doing it then. I've always had problems with that. I'm too lazy to really dive into something at the moment I'm feeling the inspiration and then afterwards I try to force myself, but it doesn't work. Be proud, dude! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bad Kids 3,017 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 This is amazing lyrics I love it so much! You should sing it for us And when you say my name, like white horses on the waves, I think it feels the same, as an ocean in my veins. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Share Posted March 23, 2013 I'm just uploading it to sound cloud. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiltedbliss 915 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 :clap: I love it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Share Posted March 23, 2013 A link has been added to the OP. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellie Sioux 8 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 aw i like it love! and your voice isn't bad at all, it's pretty good! :clap: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Share Posted March 23, 2013 aw i like it love! and your voice isn't bad at all, it's pretty good! :clap: thanks hahaha :red: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ray of Light 8,134 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Omg these lyrics are very ARTPOP :crazy: I like them Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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