NarlesLM 154 Posted April 15 Share Posted April 15 (edited) Hi fellow monsters. I would like to share with you this song I created using AI about a theme I think we all have interest since the rumoured "Frankensteined".  UPDATE - 04.16 - Final Version Remastered with New Chorus and Outro Avaible This Friday (will update when I get the links).  Lyrics: Spoiler [Verse] In the dead of night, under a moonlit sky A creature stirs, with a mournful cry Stitched together, from pieces of the past A monster born, not meant to last [Verse] I'm a Frankenstein, a creature of the dark A masterpiece of madness, a shattered heart I long for love, but all I find is A tragic fear [Verse] In the laboratory, where dreams turn to dust A heart beats, but it's filled with rust A soul trapped, in a body of regret A creation, the world tries to forget [Pre-Chorus] I'm Frankenstein, made with human parts I'm Frankenstein, ain't got no heart I'm Frankenstein, out here in the dark [Chorus] I'm Frankenstein, envisioned in his mind Stitched together in a certain design I'm not a monster, get closer you'll find A being trying everything to be fine Stitched together in a certain design Search inside this mess, you'll find A being trying everything to be fine Oooh [Bridge] I was made a monster, out of his fears I have no needs, why am I here? Please help me get rid of all theses tears I'd like to be humam just like thee Why can't I beee just like thee? Just like theee? Stitch me back together, right heeere Why can't I beee just like thee? Oooh [Chorus] I'm Frankenstein, envisioned in his mind Stitched together in a certain design I'm not a monster, get closer you'll find A being trying everything to be fine Stitched together in a certain design Search inside this mess, you'll find A being trying everything to be fine Oooh [Outro] I, I'm Frankenstein, without a heart I, I'm Frankenstein, out in the dark I, I'm Frankenstein, ignited by sparks Please feel free to share your thoughts. Edited April 16 by NarlesLM Updates 1 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
weed 68,113 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 Mama this eats 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthling 3,683 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 This is amazing!! I love the post-chorus part, the hook and the bridge. I think the bridge should be extended some more and it would be great! I'm so curious what software you used to create this?  *she switched baristas. âď¸ 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NarlesLM 154 Posted April 16 Author Share Posted April 16 (edited) 56 minutes ago, Earthling said: This is amazing!! I love the post-chorus part, the hook and the bridge. I think the bridge should be extended some more and it would be great! I'm so curious what software you used to create this?  Thank you very much for your response. I'll definitely be working a bit more on it. As of tools, I started getting a geral Idea for lyrics with ChatGPT, then I mainly used Udio (https://www.udio.com/). It's really fun to make bops I kinda expect from our Queen đ. In this link you can find a late demo in higher quality: https://www.udio.com/songs/d9tpLPdMu7ntTzwGP9tzVn I had to use a video editor in the end to add that last Chours since this software creates each 30s part independently and each algorithm run can create really different outputs. Edited April 16 by NarlesLM 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killa 14,615 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 sounds like madonna in the begining did you chose what songs to take inspiration how does this work shook at 1.30 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killa 14,615 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 i would love to know more how this was created. The bridge was amazing wow it works so well Do i hear a bit of Monster? 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
InsomniaMonster69 2,906 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 This would fit the rocky horror picture show so good! 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimotheeChalamet 3,494 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 I'm in the minority but I really don't like this sorry Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NarlesLM 154 Posted April 16 Author Share Posted April 16 (edited) 6 hours ago, Killa said: sounds like madonna in the begining did you chose what songs to take inspiration how does this work shook at 1.30 It's not song-oriented, it's genre-oriented. I used theses: Female vocalist, Electronic, Synth-pop, Electropop, Pop, Energetic, Dance-pop, Adult alternative pop rock. 6 hours ago, Killa said: i would love to know more how this was created. The bridge was amazing wow it works so well Do i hear a bit of Monster? I kinda explained in the last replies. I was inspired mostly by Gaga and her earlier dark pop, but the AI came with Madonna sounding vocals - slay I guess .  It's important to say that I don't have that much control over the keys and notes which is sad, but playing around can create really interesting things like that gorgeous Bridge. Edited April 16 by NarlesLM Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NarlesLM 154 Posted April 16 Author Share Posted April 16 5 hours ago, InsomniaMonster69 said: This would fit the rocky horror picture show so good! Don't know this show. 3 hours ago, TimotheeChalamet said: I'm in the minority but I really don't like this sorry It's ok. Music is fun I'm trying to improve it as of right now - I have already re worked the Hook and I'm currently redoing it's Chorus with minor adjustments. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killa 14,615 Posted April 16 Share Posted April 16 7 hours ago, TimotheeChalamet said: I'm in the minority but I really don't like this sorry the lyrics or the music or the end result. I'm mostly perplexed it works. The rythm of the words and is probably the worst part but i was very shocked by some parts like that it followed the formula of recitative verses without the synths, and the drums that work and then build upfor the prechorus and then an actual chorus. I don't know, the transitions are very smooth. This reworked could actually be a great demo, it's scary Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NarlesLM 154 Posted April 16 Author Share Posted April 16 2 hours ago, Killa said: the lyrics or the music or the end result. I'm mostly perplexed it works. The rythm of the words and is probably the worst part but i was very shocked by some parts like that it followed the formula of recitative verses without the synths, and the drums that work and then build upfor the prechorus and then an actual chorus. I don't know, the transitions are very smooth. This reworked could actually be a great demo, it's scary I worked a bit more on it today. Edited the post with updates Lyrics including a new chorus.  Demo will be out this Friday. I'll share the links with you  Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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