Consuelanono 238 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 5 minutes ago, mxnster said: Gaga leaves the story telling in her verses, prechoruses, bridges, etc "Just a second It's my favorite song they're gonna play And I cannot text you with A drink in my hand, eh You shoulda made some plans with me You knew that I was free And now you won't stop calling me I'm kinda busy" "I asked my girlfriend if she’d seen you 'round before She mumbled something while we got down on the floor, baby "We might’ve f*cked, not really sure, don’t quite recall But something tells me that I’ve seen him, yeah" "I'm gonna lace up my boots Throw on some leather and cruise Down the streets that I love In my fishnet gloves, I'm a sinner Then I'll go down to the bar But I won't cry anymore I'll hold my whiskey up high Kiss the bartender twice, I'm a loser I'm gonna marry the night I'm gonna marry the night" "I know that Mom and Dad think I'm a mess But it's alright, because I am rich as piss When I ignite the flames and put you in my mouth The grass eats up my insides, and my brunette starts to sprout Introducing, ladies and gentleman, Mary Jane Holland!" "Toast, one last puff and two last regrets Three spirits and twelve lonely steps Up heaven's stairway to gold Mine myself like coal A mountain of a soul Each day, I cry Oh, I feel so low from living high" "I wanna roll with him, a hard pair we will be A little gambling is fun when you're with me (I love it) Russian roulette is not the same without a gun And baby, when it's love, if it's not rough, it isn't fun (fun)" "Every John is just the same I'm sick of their city games I crave a real wild man I'm strung out on John Wayne" "I want your ugly, I want your disease I want your everything as long as it’s free I want your love Love, love, love, I want your love, hey! I want your drama, the touch of your hand, (Hey!) I want your leather-studded kiss in the sand I want your love Love, love, love, I want your love (Love, love, love, I want your love)" "Now, it's time to free me from the shame I gotta find that peace, is it too late or Could this love protect me from the pain? I would battle for you (Even if we break in two)" again, more evidence that a lengthy chorus isn't necessary and it's sometimes better to leave the story telling out of the chorus. think of a song as an essay. the chorus is the thesis statement. it should be the part of the song that sticks with people. its the part of the song that people remember. the verses, bridges, prechoruses, etc are the rest of the essay. They back up the thesis statement that's too short to be presented on its own. Does it make sense? It’s not the length as much as it’s the quality. Just don’t make it feel barren and lazy. And I’d hope we can all agree that, regardless of length, Stupid Love is her laziest and most empty chorus to date. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoeMo 3,889 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 Don't buy this at all, give me more solid info like actual lyrics www.youtube.com/jmremixes Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 On 4/1/2020 at 4:23 PM, mxnster said: out of control, reloaded, no way, earthquake > frankensh*t how can you say that about a song nobody ever listened to x) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMTT 160 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 7 hours ago, Consuelanono said: The difference, I think, is I want your stupid love is only one line. And it’s not a melodic one, either. It was probably slapped over a preexisting beat drop. For instance, “Can’t read my, Can’t read my, poker face” is only one line too - but it’s extremely melodic and crafted well so it doesn’t feel like an empty chorus. Sure, I gotcha - and basically agree I guess you could argue the "uh uhs" or "oo oos" that following the titular chorus line are the melodic part and that the instrumental is supposed to be the important part there. But again I agree with you! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
chun li 2,972 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 does this song even exist like there's no trace of it except for 4 years old rumors Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 9 hours ago, warholastar said: how can you say that about a song nobody ever listened to x) its just facts luv ans fhats on fax machine Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoanSPW 186 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 Wish it would leak already. Seems like it’s a very good song! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AntonTurnItUp 7,088 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 ...and where's the leak Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GagaArt 119 Posted April 3, 2020 Share Posted April 3, 2020 We are waiting, again Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt 469 Posted April 4, 2020 Share Posted April 4, 2020 So are we actually expecting a leak? This sounds like an April Fool's post. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Floppy 7,951 Posted April 4, 2020 Share Posted April 4, 2020 Isn't he supposed to be retiring. @kyanewest What's the tea atrl insider king? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarstruckIllusion 53,035 Posted April 4, 2020 Share Posted April 4, 2020 Less talking more leaking hello 🗣🗣🗣 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GregJA 5,288 Posted April 4, 2020 Share Posted April 4, 2020 Don’t play with my heart like this Mr. No Award Winner 2020 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rio 5,088 Posted April 4, 2020 Share Posted April 4, 2020 On 4/3/2020 at 7:17 AM, Consuelanono said: It’s not the length as much as it’s the quality. Just don’t make it feel barren and lazy. And I’d hope we can all agree that, regardless of length, Stupid Love is her laziest and most empty chorus to date. I think the chorus works. There's something fresh in a chorus that you think is gonna drop with a MASSIVE vocal chorus, but the beat just drops hard instead. An empty freshness just that bops HARD AF on its own, fun and carefree. I don't get how people can still hate on the chorus Stupid Love 😫 Just doesn't have a preachy, anthemic chorus is all Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lextyr97 20,133 Posted April 4, 2020 Share Posted April 4, 2020 2 minutes ago, Rio said: I think the chorus works. There's something fresh in a chorus that you think is gonna drop with a MASSIVE vocal chorus, but the beat just drops hard instead. An empty freshness just that bops HARD AF on its own, fun and carefree. I don't get how people can still hate on the chorus Stupid Love 😫 Just doesn't have a preachy, anthemic chorus is all That’s exactly the problem though lol to me it literally feels unfinished. Actually let me rephrase, it feels like she couldn’t come up with something good enough to go with that beat, so she just didn’t do anything Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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