evgenigerm2 4,056 Posted January 20, 2018 Share Posted January 20, 2018 I feel like the chorus is kinda off, but anyways. This is my second full-length instrumental, you can check the first one, titled "Fade For You" here. Share your thoughts on either of them in the comments below! „I allow myself to fail. I allow myself to break. I'm not afraid of my flaws.“ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 20, 2018 Share Posted January 20, 2018 Oh I really like both of 'em. Hiraeth is more original and Fade For You is more consistent. I love especially the atmosphere of Hiraeth but I think you should work a lil more on the producing (EQ, reverb, pan, echoes, spread, etc...). Also you should focus on some main melodies/instruments, but not that much. The beat and the bassline from the beginning are really cool, and then the strings sound a bit messy I guess, I'm a lil lost in the progression if you know what I mean. I let you check one on my latest instrumental that I uploaded on my soundcloud if you want to: https://soundcloud.com/louisantoinemusic/time-bomb-instrumental Keep doing music!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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