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FfFfFfFF
7 hours ago, A hunty said:

Well the poem's pretty shitty then

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Who needs the sun, when the rain's so full of life
Who needs the sky
It's here in your arms I want to be buried
You are my sanctuary


Who needs a smile, when a tear's so full of love
Who needs a home, with the stars up above
It's here in your heart I want to be carried
You are my sanctuary
Who needs the light, with the darkness in your eyes
Who needs to sleep, with the stars in the sky
It's here in your soul I want to be married
You are my sanctuary

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Fingerella
16 minutes ago, FfFfFfFF said:

Who needs the sun, when the rain's so full of life
Who needs the sky
It's here in your arms I want to be buried
You are my sanctuary


Who needs a smile, when a tear's so full of love
Who needs a home, with the stars up above
It's here in your heart I want to be carried
You are my sanctuary
Who needs the light, with the darkness in your eyes
Who needs to sleep, with the stars in the sky
It's here in your soul I want to be married
You are my sanctuary

Oh wow that's so corny and a bit Lana Del Rey'ish. It's beautiful, but it just doesn't blend well with the beats.

Sorry, I know you want me to like it but its really not that good in my own opinion.  

 

 

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