AnglerfishbraBENUS 4,843 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 first of all it is 'I've come after you' Â and 'Converse' not 'converses' Â second of all, this is kinda weird and unoriginal tbh.. Â Â 'I stuck my ipod on, You and I was on...'Â Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Better Day 5,766 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 meh, it sounds more like a poem   first of all it is 'I've come after you'  and 'Converse' not 'converses'  second of all, this is kinda weird and unoriginal tbh..   'I stuck my ipod on, You and I was on...'   If yous don't like you know where the home button is, This is the first time writing a song so expect mistakes. Together You And I! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bitter 3,640 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 nice try Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Better Day 5,766 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 nice try  Thank you Together You And I! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustDesserts 47 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 If yous don't like you know where the home button is, This is the first time writing a song so expect mistakes. Â I know, that's exactly what I clicked, after reading the first line of this "song" Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle 345 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Merging with the Singer, Songwriter thread. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlondeKingOfGGD 1,563 Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 Day I Die VERSE1 WHAT WE HAVE BOY - IS BETTER RIGHT NOW - YOU TURN MY WORLD UPSIDE DOWN - AND NO ONE CAN STOPÂ -THIS FEELING NOW - COS I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU SOME HOW PRE- CHOURUS AS WE GAZE INTO THE STARS I KNOW YOUR THE ONE - AND IF YOU LOSE INTEREST - ITS ONLY JUST BEGUN CHOURUS ITS NOT TOO LATE - FOR US TO FALL OUT - OUR LOVE IS STRONG - SO ITS SOMETHING I DOUBT - WE CANT HOLD TIME - BUT YOU'LL ALWAYS BE MINE - KNOW THAT I'LL LOVE YOU TILL THE DAY I DIE DAY I DIE - DAY I DIE - KNOW THAT I'LL LOVE YOU TILL THE DAY I DIE X2 VERSE2 THIS MURDER OF LIFE - THIS STOLEN TIME - YOU'VE TOOK THE HEART OF WHAT I THOUGHT WAS RIGHT - YOU LET ME DOWN - MESMORISED - TAUGHT ME THE WRONG - AND TOOK AWAY THE NICE PRE-CHOURUS BUT I STILL LOVE YOUÂ BOY - TURNED ME EVIL BUT I CANT IGNORE - THAT I STILL FEEL YOU - IN MY BONES - THIS BLOOD THAT DRIPS FROM MY BODY YOU OWNED VERSE3 OHH OH LORD HELP HIM THROUGH HIS PAIN - OHH OH LORD HELP US THROUGH OUR STRAIN OUTRO DAY I DIE - DAY I DIE - KNOW THAT I'LL LOVE YOU TILL THE DAY I DIE X2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cameron Dallas 11 Posted June 11, 2013 Share Posted June 11, 2013 So I'm working on my first demo cd, and this is the first snippet I have. It's the more low quality song, but I wanted opinions  https://soundcloud.com/angelomonroe/on-the-floor-instrumental-demo Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axl Jax 274 Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 A quick mashup that I made of Born This Way & Hair! I altered the vocals as always  http://soundcloud.com/daneastonmusic/born-this-way-x-hair-dan Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duke 437 Posted June 15, 2013 Share Posted June 15, 2013 I'm starting to put together some stuff, you can hear it here:Â https://soundcloud.com/danduke Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrewStevens 5,249 Posted June 16, 2013 Share Posted June 16, 2013 Â This is my new remix guys :) Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest 699 Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Hey guys,Heres my new song Solar Flare: https://soundcloud.com/tempestgriswold/solar-flareIts my first final version of a track, tell me whatcha think!It one of the four songs that will be released on my EP "Tempest" out July 2nd.Please share with everyone, im trying to get a following for when i send it to labels.Heres the lyrics:Desperate degenerate,Your boyfriend has you whipped,Chained and cuffed to his side,Never allowed to shineOne day you'll break away,Finally keep yourself safe,Realize that together you can't thrive ohBetter off alone,King of your own throne,Look into the sky,Solar flare burning so bright ohThe world is ending,Escape the earthquakeAtmosphere's fading,No air to intakeRise with me,They cant infiltrateWe're Phoenix's we can fly awayDesperate degenerateWe're so ultravioletDon't let the black hole turn you to dustRise again,You are enoughYou saved me,Ill save you too,Your here for me,I'm here for you,Between us our love is true,There is no lust,Your not being used,You'll rise with me,And fly away,From the ashes,To a blaze,When your with me,Ill keep you safeOhCan he give you that,Or is he just a twatDoes he make you feel worth it?Can he promise he'll be here,Even through the solar flareThe world is ending,Escape the earthquakeAtmosphere's fading,No air to intakeRise with me,They cant infiltrateWe're Phoenix's we can fly awayDesperate degenerateWere so ultravioletDon't let the black hole turn you to dust,Rise again,You are enoughThe world is ending,My visions fading,The earth is shaking,This solar flareThe sun is coming,To bring us to the end,So why am I so calm when I'm going to be deadCause ill rise from the ground,Ill help you out,Well fly away til were safe and sound,Phoenixes will never die,We persevere,Shine our own lightDesperate degenerate,Your boyfriend has you whipped,Chained and cuffed to his side,Never allowed to shineOne day you'll break away,Finally keep yourself safe,Realize that together you can't thrive ohThe world is ending,Escape the earthquakeAtmosphere fading,No air to intakeRise with me,They cant infiltrateWe're Phoenix's we can fly awayThe world is ending,Escape the earthquakeAtmosphere fading,No air to intakeRise with me,They cant infiltrateWe're Phoenix's we can fly away Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
artpopthisway 0 Posted June 19, 2013 Share Posted June 19, 2013 anyone interested in producing a song for me? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativenewyorker 1,190 Posted June 20, 2013 Share Posted June 20, 2013 anyone interested in producing a song for me? What kind of music do you make? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
artpopthisway 0 Posted June 20, 2013 Share Posted June 20, 2013 What kind of music do you make? i want to make like electronic techno trance with a hip hop vibe. i wrote this song a few months ago that i want to do something with but producing isn't my greatest quality :p Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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