GAGASEXUAL 3,795 Posted December 31, 2016 Author Share Posted December 31, 2016 1 hour ago, Bette Davis said: Ignore all the nasty remarks and keep doing what you love! It seems like you are off to a good start. My suggestion is to add more layers and depth to your sound. Also, I think better consistency throughout the song would help as it feels a bit choppy to me. Good luck! Thank you <3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
dopega 3,737 Posted December 31, 2016 Share Posted December 31, 2016 I like the melody and 1:15 - 1:45 sounds nice tbh Some parts of the song sound kinda noisy imo Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gagadonna 10,801 Posted December 31, 2016 Share Posted December 31, 2016 LG6 producer confirmed Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordmaler 896 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 Personally I think it's good. Now... With this weak a$$ personality you won't come far. As musician you MUST have EXTRA THICK skin. When you want to share your tracks with everyone, you have to accept that there will be people who will dislike your work. Imagine that Gaga came here after Joanne release and saw our comments about it and then wrote on her twitter "I made AOTY, I worked so hard last three months cooking pasta for Ronson and just wanted to sell 500.000 copies in first week and 600.000 in second without promo. I am really sad right now. Monsters are dead." Media would do her worse than jews Jesus. So honey I wish you all the best and keep working hard. Appreciate EVERY comment you get because some people spent their time to bless you with attention. Happy New Year Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
donutellha 13,819 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 its pretty well constructed for an amateur the 8-bit sounds for the verses are quite nice, but indeed it's a bit choppy, but great overall! love the chords in the chorus! Walk down the runway but don't puke, it's okay. You just had 10 donuts today. Without frosting. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARTPOPe 10,031 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 Oh my, all these friendly and kind little monsters coming through... monsters and kind, good one... yaaaassssss bash him with your incredibly annoying "I'm sooo suuuper saaaaaassy, if I don't like something, it's automatically bad in general and for everyone" attitude. About the narcissism, I've seen way worse topics/posts/answers on this forum, so some of you should take several seats.@Austin Times I like it. It's a fun track to listen to. Well done! It's quite noisy and gritty/scratchy at a few points though, but with a little more work such as alternation and different melodies for different parts of the song (2nd verse maybe slightly different from the first?), adjustment and equalizing of synths/drums/bass and overall mastering, the track could become even better. Also, I know the extraordinary and vast feeling of euphoria after a creative process and the unbridled urge to share a piece of work with the world just too well. Keep working, no one is born a master. Stream The Love Invention Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bad Kids 3,058 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 To be honest, I think this is quite good, It reminds me of what I'd enjoy! It's not even touching the borderlines of bad. <3 great job! And you're far far above this: And when you say my name, like white horses on the waves, I think it feels the same, as an ocean in my veins. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
babyboo 965 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 1 hour ago, Bad Kids said: To be honest, I think this is quite good, It reminds me of what I'd enjoy! It's not even touching the borderlines of bad. <3 great job! And you're far far above this: its one of the best instrumental of 2016 wdu OT: it's so ARTPOP i like it. just make it a little bit less 'noisy' bc that zedd trend is long gone. actually, clean it up like the WFH instrumental he posted (not too empty like that tho) and it would be a lot nicer imo. just my 2 cents Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
bliaz 897 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 Well, It's not that bad, imo (I don't like EDM). But I don't like your attitude so much. Take note from the bad and good comments and you will do it better the next time. English isn’t my first language, so please excuse any mistakes Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bad Kids 3,058 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 2 hours ago, babyboo said: its one of the best instrumental of 2016 wdu OT: it's so ARTPOP i like it. just make it a little bit less 'noisy' bc that zedd trend is long gone. actually, clean it up like the WFH instrumental he posted (not too empty like that tho) and it would be a lot nicer imo. just my 2 cents How about Fancy - Iggy Azealia I mean at least he did some melody and chord changes instead of repeating the whole track, but I like that Work From Home song a lot actually, yeah it's really one of the best minimalistic instrumental sorry if I've offended you And when you say my name, like white horses on the waves, I think it feels the same, as an ocean in my veins. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhettoFabulous 18,501 Posted January 1, 2017 Share Posted January 1, 2017 15 hours ago, YCHofficial said: Sorry but 2016 is about to end and you want people to remember that? This is just... not acceptable... Where did u even come from 15 hours ago, YCHofficial said: It was really bad. Really horrendous. OMG💀 Y'all no this isn't..... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GAGASEXUAL 3,795 Posted January 1, 2017 Author Share Posted January 1, 2017 13 hours ago, lordmaler said: Personally I think it's good. Now... With this weak a$$ personality you won't come far. As musician you MUST have EXTRA THICK skin. When you want to share your tracks with everyone, you have to accept that there will be people who will dislike your work. Imagine that Gaga came here after Joanne release and saw our comments about it and then wrote on her twitter "I made AOTY, I worked so hard last three months cooking pasta for Ronson and just wanted to sell 500.000 copies in first week and 600.000 in second without promo. I am really sad right now. Monsters are dead." Media would do her worse than jews Jesus. So honey I wish you all the best and keep working hard. Appreciate EVERY comment you get because some people spent their time to bless you with attention. Happy New Year You're right. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GAGASEXUAL 3,795 Posted January 1, 2017 Author Share Posted January 1, 2017 13 hours ago, donutellha said: its pretty well constructed for an amateur the 8-bit sounds for the verses are quite nice, but indeed it's a bit choppy, but great overall! love the chords in the chorus! Thank you <3 <3 <3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GAGASEXUAL 3,795 Posted January 1, 2017 Author Share Posted January 1, 2017 13 hours ago, ARTPOPe said: Oh my, all these friendly and kind little monsters coming through... monsters and kind, good one... yaaaassssss bash him with your incredibly annoying "I'm sooo suuuper saaaaaassy, if I don't like something, it's automatically bad in general and for everyone" attitude. About the narcissism, I've seen way worse topics/posts/answers on this forum, so some of you should take several seats.@Austin Times I like it. It's a fun track to listen to. Well done! It's quite noisy and gritty/scratchy at a few points though, but with a little more work such as alternation and different melodies for different parts of the song (2nd verse maybe slightly different from the first?), adjustment and equalizing of synths/drums/bass and overall mastering, the track could become even better. Also, I know the extraordinary and vast feeling of euphoria after a creative process and the unbridled urge to share a piece of work with the world just too well. Keep working, no one is born a master. Thank you <3 <3 <3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GAGASEXUAL 3,795 Posted January 1, 2017 Author Share Posted January 1, 2017 10 hours ago, Bad Kids said: To be honest, I think this is quite good, It reminds me of what I'd enjoy! It's not even touching the borderlines of bad. <3 great job! And you're far far above this: Thank you <3 <3 <3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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