A cappella arrangement of Hair

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So a little while back I asked you guys what Gaga song I should arrange for my a cappella group:

Because we are a LGBTQA+ advocacy group, I decided on the empowerment anthem "Hair." Here's the arrangement: https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/21b0d83b850ddf1a80be1a3ba010857db47bb5e6

Please let me know what you think and of what I should improve on!

 

[REALITY 76,276]

This is a fantastic arrangement! Hair is one of my favorite songs and you certainly did it justice 

[Killa 17,461]

Oh i'm no longer in the LGBT choir but they sure lack a Gaga song. Could you share this?

I'd say it looks fine but somehow like it was taken from a piano score. There's too many divisi, do you have that many singers?

Congratulations, for the effort and the success.

[crisTEAne 21,059]

playing it for the 3rd time. beautiful job! 

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4 hours ago, M Monstre said:

This is a fantastic arrangement! Hair is one of my favorite songs and you certainly did it justice 

 

2 hours ago, T E A said:

playing it for the 3rd time. beautiful job! 

 

2 hours ago, Killa said:

Oh i'm no longer in the LGBT choir but they sure lack a Gaga song. Could you share this?

I'd say it looks fine but somehow like it was taken from a piano score. There's too many divisi, do you have that many singers?

Congratulations, for the effort and the success.

Thank you guys!!! And @Killa it's more on the complicated side but we'd be able to pull it off. We have a lot more girls than guys hence the divisi mostly being for the soprano and alto parts