Bloody hooker 6,445 Posted February 13, 2016 Share Posted February 13, 2016 I like both the unmastered and mastered versions. This mutual gaze was a “longing to touch” or a "pre-coitus" stare. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applause 650 Posted February 13, 2016 Author Share Posted February 13, 2016 Thanks both. I enjoy learning more about music production as I go! Xalser Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
What About Us 1,499 Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 On 2/6/2016 at 0:05 AM, Applause said: Oh? I'd love to hear it. I get inspiration for a lot of songs. Even Gaga. I had an original inspiration from telephone, actually. But that got buried for a later project, perhaps. @GawdGa ( ) it's a mess tho. That is why I am going back to it at a later date and reworking the whole thing. But that was inspired by Telephone. I have a song I'm doing that's inspired by Telephone, but with an ARTPOP influence. We need to collaborate! Promise I'll always be there. Promise I'll be the cure. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TopazBlue 2,100 Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 Reminds me of Medusa 🔻 𝔫𝔬 𝔭𝔯𝔢𝔧𝔲𝔡𝔦𝔠𝔢, 𝔫𝔬 𝔧𝔲𝔡𝔤𝔢𝔪𝔢𝔫𝔱, 𝔟𝔲𝔱 𝔟𝔬𝔲𝔫𝔡𝔩𝔢𝔰𝔰 𝔣𝔯𝔢𝔢𝔡𝔬𝔪 🔺 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
T Man 382 Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 Wow you're good, I looove it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applause 650 Posted February 14, 2016 Author Share Posted February 14, 2016 20 hours ago, Versus said: this sounds really great it just needs some EQ work (i.e. more on the high end because everything sounds a bit muffled, and a bit more in the mids unless youre adding vocals). theres also a synth or something thats not adding anything to the song other than this really weird super sub bass rumbling sound and it would clear up the mix so much if you took it out and put more sub on the kick drum or low strings or something instead also maybe back off on the effects a bit (delay and the gated volume automation or whatever that is) because it just makes the mix sound a bit muddy, and as a rule for this style of music you should try and have at least 3 levels of distance in your mix (near, mid and far) where everything here seems to be in the same kind of range (far because of the wetness of the reverb) otherwise keep up the good work hope this helps !!!!!!! Thanks so much for the advice, I love all that you had to offer! I will def apply what I know with this feedback and learn what I do not. Xalser Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applause 650 Posted February 14, 2016 Author Share Posted February 14, 2016 3 hours ago, ExplicitBeauty1 said: I have a song I'm doing that's inspired by Telephone, but with an ARTPOP influence. We need to collaborate! 58 minutes ago, TopazBlue said: Reminds me of Medusa OMG. I love this! 45 minutes ago, TMan86 said: Wow you're good, I looove it Thanks hun. Some work to do. But, getting there. Xalser Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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