Slayer 9,227 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 This isn't supposed to disrespect Gaga's artistic integrity. Obviously she perfects every detail in her songs and it's her vision. This is just a "what if" scenario, if you were in Gaga's shoes: how would you change some of her songs? Dance in the Dark - The "Marilyn, Judy, Sylvia" lyric. I hate to say it, but it's too similar to the Vogue bridge. Teeth - A "bigger" chorus. Marry the Night - More church bells in the intro, a better chorus, a less abrupt ending. Born This Way - A more disco production, different chord progression in the chorus. Mary Jane Holland - Better chorus and post-chorus, no "rich as piss" lyric. Gypsy - Live production, no autotune. Aura - Demo vocals, shortened intro. I love judas SO MUCH but I canʹt look like a copycat of JLO!!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
XGirlfriend 950 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 nvm i posted in the wrong thread Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benji 20,113 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 Dance in the Dark - The "Marilyn, Judy, Sylvia" lyric. I hate to say it, but it's too similar to the Vogue bridge. That whole section is one of, if not her best lyrics Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister max 18,480 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 road to love- cut it in to different songs Buy ARTPOP on itunes or smth? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adelephant 288 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I would remove the dreadful bridges from "Venus" and "Mary Jane Holland". Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Evans 8,917 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 the DITD thing was intentional so I don't mind it + I would never change a thing about Marry the Night the only abrupt ending in her discography is LoveGame idk if it's just my copy but i feel like it ends 2 seconds too fast Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benji 20,113 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I Like It Rough, despite being near perfection needs to take some elements from the demo. The demo slays Aura needs the demo vocals Swine needs to be stronger, bigger and angrier. It's kind of pathetic compared to what it should have been. Jewels N' Drugs and Dope should have been deleted Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayer 9,227 Posted October 30, 2015 Author Share Posted October 30, 2015 That whole section is one of, if not her best lyrics That's what frustrates me about it. It's fantastic in its own right, but it's an obvious rip-off of the Vogue bridge, which slightly cheapens it for me. I love judas SO MUCH but I canʹt look like a copycat of JLO!!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcina Dimitrescu 1,157 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I'd make Ariana sing fuh fuh focus on me. Yes i know its about Gaga songs but i dont give a **** That's what frustrates me about it. It's fantastic in its own right, but it's an obvious rip-off of the Vogue bridge, which slightly cheapens it for me. I guess you could say it's....reductive ---------- You say ripoff, i say loveletter Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KURUSHITOVSKA 20,451 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I loved Gypsy on the piano when she performed it for the first time at the AMPYA event. I don't like the "fast" production. ¿Qué currículum tiene ésta tarántula? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supersonic 49,376 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I'd put strings and more electric guitars on The Edge of Glory as well as changing some of the EQs, I just relistened to it and it sounded kinda flat. I'd remove Money Honey & Starstruck from its existence I'd replace Bad Romance's synths with more crisper sounding ones and reduce the Auto-Tune on Gaga's voice, maybe even let her redo it completely because her vocals sound really low-quality on the track. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
LebaneseDude 6,146 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I'd remove Starstruck from its existence Edited just now by LebaneseDude. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KooKoo 1,014 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I would change the instrumental for the chorus in Sexxx Dreams. Dreaming is free Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrethraFranklin 434 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 Three words: SEX DREAMS DEMO>>>>>> That sultry raw voice in the verses Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
venusian 4,686 Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 I'd put strings and more electric guitars on The Edge of Glory as well as changing some of the EQs, I just relistened to it and it sounded kinda flat. I'd remove Money Honey & Starstruck from its existence I'd replace Bad Romance's synths with more crisper sounding ones and reduce the Auto-Tune on Gaga's voice, maybe even let her redo it completely because her vocals sound really low-quality on the track. NOT MONEY HONEY WELCOME TO THE TRAGIC KINGDOM Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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