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Hello monsters i know these is nothing to do with the thread but please give me feedback these is the first song i have ever written.

 

Baby,baby,

The truth lies behind our love.

Were the artist of this love,

but we ain't good artist so

are love is sentenced to a complete wreck. (wreck, wreck, wreck)

 

Hey guy do you wanna se (wanna see x3)

 

The girl who lives,

the girl who ****s,

the girl which is gonna make you cry,

burn your pretty eyes.

The girl which is going to burn are painting of love

 

Hey baby, baby can't you see,

the truth behind me.

That one which is burning inside me.

Hey baby, baby can't you see,

the girl who lives behind me. X2

 

We are eternal souls,

floating in these dark sky.

no end,

no point.

 

Were just worthless souls in these never ending universe.

Baby one last chance,

the truth that behalfs as

Baby, baby please let me see it

 

Hey baby, baby can't you see,

the truth behind me.

That one which is burning inside me.

Hey baby, baby can't you see,

the girl who lives behind me. X2

It looks and probably will sound amazing! :hug:

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