ultraviolent 0 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 found this on a poetry blog, nd whoever rode it surprisinly is a Little Monster! i just thought it was fun and dark at the same time..ive never really read a poem that had to do with a party...it reminds me of Project X but it's kinda dark at the same time. im obsessed with it. thoughts? HAZE You ever get that feeling? When the room begins to spin Your body gets the jitters and the alcohol starts to win Your thoughts come to a haze A mural of retrospect You succumb to a powerful daze Remembering not of what comes next You’re left to your own devices surrounded by drunken beasts but your friends have left the party And so it’s you which they will feast Trapped in a crowd of delinquents, Juveniles to a degree thrashing hard into one another Bodies convulsing to the beat Red solo cups praise the skies, Chandelier lay dead on floor Red’s the color of all their eyes Carnivores just begging for more But the night has yet to end Cuz the party has just begun It takes the betrayal of all your friends To finally realize that you have none Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrAmor 0 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 Slayed Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honey Boo Boo 203 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 It takes the betrayal of all your friends To finally realize that you have none Tbh, my life. I don't find the poem that great though. Just my two cents. A dolla makes me holla!💰💵💸 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
garnite 7 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 not impressive to me, it doesn't really say anything. do i ever get drunk and abandoned by my friends. well no. it sounds like it should be a blog entry rather than a poem with rather plain, drab language. the part microsoft ie quoted was the least profound. it's like saying it takes the emptying of a cup to realise you have an empty cup. i knew the cup was empty before the sentence was even finished but thanks for stating the obvious. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterOfficial 11,045 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 reminds me of Icarus by Bastille Look who's digging their own grave That is what they all say You'll drink yourself to death Look who makes their own bed Lies right down within it And what will you have left? Out on the front doorstep Drinking from a paper cup You won't remember this Living beyond your years Acting out all their fears You feel it in your chest Look out to the future But it tells you nothing So take another breath exorcise my mind Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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