NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Hey Monsters! As some of you might know, I'm bisexual. I discovered it not long ago and I wanted to write a song about that. I wrote other songs like "Two Hearts" about gay love. The concept of "Those Eyes" was me being drunk in a club, with girls over me who want some D but I don't care because I suddenly see a boy and I crush on him. "Those Eyes" means the boy, it's not that explicit but once you understood that, you got the song. Then I decide to meet the boy and have fun with him, no matter what they're gonna say because that is who I am and what I feel. The idea was to say that you can get attracted through the eyes and the heart and not always through the gender. Love is blind and love has no sex. It is a fresh demo, so be tolerant please. Of course I still dont have a good mic so the quality of the recording is low and I obviously used autotune Let me know what you think about it Spoiler don't even try to listen to it without headphones Lyrics: Things are getting nasty I've drunk too much I gotta sit down 1, 2, 3 girls are over me I think they wanna get it down I’m not gonna complain It feels so good I’m losing my mind When we’re done they just want it again But those eyes across the room are kind I look at them and they at look at mine It feels so wrong but it feels so fine How good it is I wanna try Turn off the light I look at them and they at look at mine I’m just willing to cross the line All the girls want me for the night But but but but I only see you and I want you now I only see you and I want you Baby I don’t care What they’re gonna say Come to me tonight I only see you Baby I don’t care What they’re gonna say I’ll come to you tonight I only see you Those eyes Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerFear 5,915 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Poker face is shooketh NIGHTCRAWLER the new bisexual chanteuse is here to stay Jessie J who? Spoiler I really like it tho. The instrumental reminds me of Dance with the dead which I love Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCureinMalibu 45,913 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Really like this instrumentals.... But the voice autotuned just.... The chorus could have been way better. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 3 minutes ago, TheCureinMalibu said: Really like this instrumentals.... But the voice autotuned just.... The chorus could have been way better. I know .. what can I do ? Spoiler except buy a new mic lmao too lazy Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomsches 16,928 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Sounds quite dated and the lyrics are uncreative. Sorry, not my cup of tea. Keep on working though! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 8 minutes ago, BeerFear said: Poker face is shooketh NIGHTCRAWLER the new bisexual chanteuse is here to stay Jessie J who? Hide contents I really like it tho. The instrumental reminds me of Dance with the dead which I love lmao and thank you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 Just now, tomsches said: Sounds quite dated and the lyrics are uncreative. Sorry, not my cup of tea. Keep on working though! thank you for being honest Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fantina 2,925 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 The beginning is to die for!!! The chorus needs something,but all in all a great song!!! STREAM LEGENDARY ON HBO MAX Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hades 27,980 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 What a banger! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 19 minutes ago, Fantina said: The beginning is to die for!!! The chorus needs something,but all in all a great song!!! thank you!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 2 minutes ago, Hades said: What a banger! thanks sis, but I gotta work on it. It'll be better once it's finished !! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hades 27,980 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 I like your intros in general. Congratulations esp is great. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mana Mahad 1,749 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 It's better than witness Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
scallywally 626 Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Good on you! reminds me of a slowed down Britneys 3. I like it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 13 minutes ago, Monster Boy said: It's better than witness thank youuuu Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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