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Posted a lot of Gaga covers over the years, please give it a listen!!! (AURA COVER IS MY FAV ?)  

My original song (also on iTunes & Google Play) 

Aww, I remember playing around in this thread (and others like it) years ago. It honestly inspired me to keep writing and singing, and I've even performed a few originals around campus. Time to t

Molly Aphrodite

The verses (I assume their verses, the stanzas that start with 'I'm not thinking straight' and 'My heart will not die') are not as strong as they could/should be with a song like this. They're a little too short and simple, and don't effectively capture the emotion that the rest of the song does.

The chorus (once again, I assume the chorus) is really really good. It has this grunge-y feel to it while also seeming like a pop song.

And the 'hook' ("I think I'm over overdosing now, And I think that you know how") is really simple but effective. I like it! :party:

Overall it has great potential and some great moments, but the verses don't seem to effect the audience in the way that they should.

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BellaDonnaDiana

A Work in progress. Thought I would share with you all...

 

With Her Eyes Closed
 

She’s not alone
But she is lonely
She’s got to move on show them who’s wrong
This girl is strong
But not when she’s alone
She will mend at the seems
But fear all her dreams

 

With her eyes closed
There is nothing she knows
She is stronger when asleep
This girl who is a freak; She is only different
But lost in her own image; with her eyes closed tonight she dies
Whilst tonight you cry
Over her dead body lifeless and cold
Her eyes are forever, forever closed

 

Forever closed forever closed
forever forever Forever closed

 

It’s all over
But was it worth it?
She’s now gone away
Never to come back
She falls asleep
And tries to see that nothing was true
Her body lifeless and blue

 

With her eyes closed
There is nothing she knows
She is stronger when asleep
This girl who is a freak; She is only different
But lost in her own image; with her eyes closed tonight she dies
Whilst tonight you cry
Over her dead body lifeless and cold
Her eyes are forever, forever closed

 

Forever closed forever closed
Forever, forever ,Forever closed

 

She will wake one day
To realise her life on the front page
She won’t want to remember
How her life went up in flames
She was to blame
For the lies and hatred
That made me stray away

 

With her eyes closed
There is nothing she knows
She is stronger when asleep
This girl who is a freak; She is only different
But lost in her own image; with her eyes closed tonight she dies
Whilst tonight you cry
Over her dead body lifeless and cold
Her eyes are forever, forever closed

 

With her eyes closed
She will sleep once again
They will remain forever closed
Forever closed

Forever closed

 

 

This is something I am working on I will finish it soon... I got the idea down first and thought I must share this!

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She’s not alone

But she is lonely

She’s got to move on show them who’s wrong

This girl is strong

But not when she’s alone

She will mend at the seems

But fear all her dreams

 

:lolgaga:

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like I said work in progress... I have just got the idea down and now I will finilise it in the next coming weeks... unless my novel takes over... plus I am moving jobs... so who knows maybe I will lose my writing ability all together....

:lolgaga:

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Molly Aphrodite

Hey guys! It's that time again..

Season 2 of GGD's songwriting competition Platinum Hit starts on Saturday!

Here is the link to the first season so you can see how the game works - http://gagadaily.com/index.php?showtopic=35974&page=132#entry2257017

Platinum Hit combines lyric creation, subject exploration, light-hearted competition, and a sense of community.

We had several contestants from this very thread play last season, and ended up making it very far!

We would love to have anybody who's interested check out the signups on Saturday and hopefully join our game! :excited:

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Hey guys! It's that time again..

Season 2 of GGD's songwriting competition Platinum Hit starts on Saturday!

Here is the link to the first season so you can see how the game works - http://gagadaily.com/index.php?showtopic=35974&page=132#entry2257017

Platinum Hit combines lyric creation, subject exploration, light-hearted competition, and a sense of community.

We had several contestants from this very thread play last season, and ended up making it very far!

We would love to have anybody who's interested check out the signups on Saturday and hopefully join our game! :excited:

 

Joining tbh :nails:

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Opinions plz? :hor:

 

Baby im just like a pretty mirage
Amongst the air im camouflage
Intangible, impossible to touch
A vivid dream and then you wake up

 

 

Im as transparent as a window pane
Im a victim of my own wicked game
And when you caress my heart of glass
Dont be surprised if it goes smash

 

I wish I could write my own life story prose
But baby this is the life I chose
I owe it to myself
Every day playing out a part
On a stage wooden as my own heart
And I swear i'll play it well
Its hard to drag me down you see
When ive got a hologram heartbeat

 

 

Baby im just like a beautiful oasis
Leave you thirsting for more and baby that's my basis
Never enough, i'll never quench your desires
I'll keep shrivelling up until im drier and drier

Im as open as an empty book
But I wont let anybody look
And when you go to turn the page
Dont be surprised if its ripped out today

 

I wish I could write my own life story prose
But baby this is the life I chose
I owe it to myself
Every day playing out a part
On a stage wooden as my own heart
And I swear i'll play it well
Its hard to drag me down you see
When ive got a hologram heartbeat

 

 

 

You just wanted to mend my heart
But I played you like a golden harp
Sweet melody across the sky
When I rust over, the music dies

 

 

How can I reveal if what I feel isnt real?
If the truth is a lie is my disguise a surprise?
Im confused, im abused, I dont know what to do
Nothing to lose
Open my mouth, without a doubt, I wanna shout, let it all out

 

I wish I could write my own life story prose
But baby this is the life I chose
I owe it to myself
Every day playing out a part
On a stage wooden as my own heart
And I swear i'll play it well
Its hard to drag me down you see
When ive got a hologram heartbeat

 

Can you see me now?
Can you feel me now?
Can you taste me now?
Can you touch me now?

 

Can you see me now?

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