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  1. 1. What is your specialty?

    • I'm a singer
    • I'm a music writer / poet
    • I'm a music producer


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DietCoke

Hi you guys! Can I get an opinion on some of my song writing (I want to be a singer :) )

The most recent song I wrote is called Bubbles, although the title has still made no appearance in the rest of the song ( :toofloppy: )

Verse 1:

When my pillow is wet with all my tears,

Shed by all of my unspoken fears

Then maybe, i'll think it's time

Time to go out and dance tonight

Pre-Chorus:

I'm alone, I'm alone

But I'm not going home

It's too late, to late to look back

So I'll turn off the phone

Chorus:

And I'll fade away

I'll let my hips free to sway

I'm leaving from the grey

But when the sun comes up

I'll realize , that maybe the party was too much.

I find it ironic because it's not even about partying

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Harry

Re-posting cos it got pushed back :hor:

Okay so this is the WIP instrumental of my new song

http://soundcloud.com/harrybmusic/how-you-feel-instrumental

I've recorded guitars for my music before but this is the first time I've really been ambitious and had guitar be the lead instrument, so I'd be happy to hear opinions

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Hi you guys! Can I get an opinion on some of my song writing (I want to be a singer :) )

The most recent song I wrote is called Bubbles, although the title has still made no appearance in the rest of the song ( :toofloppy: )

Verse 1:

When my pillow is wet with all my tears,

Shed by all of my unspoken fears

Then maybe, i'll think it's time

Time to go out and dance tonight

Pre-Chorus:

I'm alone, I'm alone

But I'm not going home

It's too late, to late to look back

So I'll turn off the phone

Chorus:

And I'll fade away

I'll let my hips free to sway

I'm leaving from the grey

But when the sun comes up

I'll realize , that maybe the party was too much.

I find it ironic because it's not even about partying

Looks pretty good so far, just seems like you're trying too hard to make it rhyme if you see what I mean?

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DietCoke

Re-posting cos it got pushed back :hor:

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Looks pretty good so far, just seems like you're trying too hard to make it rhyme if you see what I mean?

Yeah I know what you mean. Thanks for giving me your opinion! :)

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candiedroses

I don't know where my other topics went about my songs (or I am just not smart enough to find them) !!

I have a different song I would love opinions on. There are no vocals yet, either, for this song. I simply will say that I am a melody-writer, just not a lyric-writer. http://soundcloud.com/miller_aaron_k/fade-disappear-original-demo

Please leave me criticism.

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Riley

If anybody is willing to produce a few songs for me, for free, I would greatly appreciate it!

I have a few songs, the chords and melodies and lyrics and everything, I just need somebody to produce a track for them. PM if interested!

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Tempest

I wrote probably my best work yet!

Greatest mistake

Verse 1:

You broke it off with me,

I couldn't believe,

We said forever,

Never wanted you to leave

But I'm better off without you,

Now that I'm free,

I can do whatever,

I can do anything

I am not afraid to go,

Out on the streets alone,

I can protect myself,

Never asked for your help

You said you never lied,

I saw the truth with my own eyes,

Ima leave you petrified

Prechorus:l

I never thought it would end this way

Years of darkness,

Years of pain,

I was broken from the start,

I Knew I couldn't take,

Another blow to my heart,

Your My greatest mistake

Chorus:

Why did I love you,

Now we're through,

I know it's true,

Nothing I can do

I've been hurt before,

I'm stumbling,

My greatest mistake,

Was letting you in

Letting you in

Verse 2:

At first it was sweet,

Then it got bitter,

Didn't want to be with me,

Just wanted to be a sinner

Stuck in the darkness,

Couldn't find a way out,

You trapped me there,

And left me without

Your love,

Greatest mistake,

Your possession,

Greatest mistake,

Our connection,

Greatest mistake,

Your attention,

My greatest mistake

We faked our perfection,

And hid our disconnection,

My heart was unprotectected,

Your my greatest mistake

Prechorus:

I never thought it would end this way

Years of darkness,

Years of pain,

Broken from the start,

Knew I couldn't take,

Another blow to my heart,

My greatest mistake

Chorus:

Why did I love you,

Now we're through,

I know it's true,

Nothing I can do

I've been hurt before,

I'm stumbling,

My greatest mistake,

Was letting you in

Bridge:

I will not lie,

I will not pretend,

Your my greatest mistake,

In the end,

Oh in the end

Ahaa greatest mistake

Ahaa greatest mistake

Ahaa greatest mistake

Chorus:

Why did I love you,

Now we're through,

I know it's true,

Nothing I can do

Outro:

And I won't miss,

Your meaningless kiss,

Your soundless lips,

Your dark abyss

Greatest mistake

Greatest mistake

Greatest mistake

Greatest mistake

Greatest mistake

Greatest mistake

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Harry

I have a new song :) Called "How You Feel". Spent a lot of time working on this one so please listen + comment

http://soundcloud.com/harrybmusic/harry-b-how-you-feel

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AbuHassan1992

I have a new song :) Called "How You Feel". Spent a lot of time working on this one so please listen + comment

http://soundcloud.com/harrybmusic/harry-b-how-you-feel

It's really good! Reminds me of the XX (whom I love, btw)
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http://soundcloud.com/j-mafia/j-mafia-burning-down-1 here's an album track. It's titled Burning Down. it's produced by BLAX (Ghettogoth) :)

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Rollercoaster

I have a new song :) Called "How You Feel". Spent a lot of time working on this one so please listen + comment

http://soundcloud.com/harrybmusic/harry-b-how-you-feel

I love this so much. It's like a teen angst rock ballad performed by a reggae artist covered by an indy rock band. My head exploded.

Anywho, I'm looking for an instrumentalist/producer and vocalist... well, basically, I'm looking to put together a creative hub of collaborators. You know like Xenomania, The Doo-wops, etc etc. A small team of creative collaborative minds that have the whole package to put out there - writing, instrumental, production, vocal - in order to dip our toes in the pond of the music world and just create something beautiful. I write (obviously) and I play piano and stuff, but it would all be done as one big thing together, so if you think something sounds good instead of a line, we can try it out, and vice versa. I play piano, a bit of guitar, I do some production, I write, but I do not under any circumstances wish to inflict my voice upon the world haha.

Ideally, a group of 3 or 4 would be brilliant - I have a few written and part-written projects we could start with to see if we gel.

To be clear, this is not a performance group, just a behind-the-scenes group... like.. an invisible band, so to speak.

I think it would be interesting, a group of Gaga fans collaborating on something like this - creative minds and such. Hit me up, peopleskis.

A little about my style - I write about anything and everything. I once wrote a song about a cabbage haha it was a telephone parody, but you get my point. I'm pretty versatile. I'm thinking of taking the 'ideals' that we'd have for a pop record from an idol (Gaga or not) and turning it into something real. If I get co-operation, I believe it could be something really fun to do.

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Harry

I love this so much. It's like a teen angst rock ballad performed by a reggae artist covered by an indy rock band. My head exploded.

****ing great description haha thank you so much!!

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randomkid

Guyzz heres what I'm working on atm:

http://soundcloud.com/djmoonbeatmusic/for-the-better-preview/s-Lko6w

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