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i wrote a song it's called voiceless it's for my mother whose liver's all messed up

i shan't acknowledge the words you spoke

when the room was bare, bar us

you raised your hands at my demands

you didn't understand

i shan't acknowledge your sullen glance

your buddy holly stare

with your tobacco myth, your thin mid-rift

and your flowing locks of hair

i ponder our ability to remedy what ails you...

and if i find out that your words are see through...

my voice will fly away, dear christ! i am now voiceless

i am now voiceless, really voiceless

and my heart is just as dim, dear christ! i am now voiceless

quite voiceless

and i know that i am clinically disabled

but i couldn't even sing before, my babies!

put a glass to break all the happy people

all of the happy people

DATS ALL IVE GOT AND I WANT UR OPINIONS IF U DONT LIKE IT DONT SAY ANYTHING IF U LIKE IT PM ME AND I CAN WORK IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2 COPIES TO THE FIRST PERSON WHO PMS ME>>>>>

by the way, i forgot to say tha

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I just wrote this song, and I really struggled with the chorus, I feel like it's very weak. What do you think?

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i wrote a song it's called voiceless it's for my mother whose liver's all messed up

i shan't acknowledge the words you spoke

when the room was bare, bar us

you raised your hands at my demands

you didn't understand

i shan't acknowledge your sullen glance

your buddy holly stare

with your tobacco myth, your thin mid-rift

and your flowing locks of hair

i ponder our ability to remedy what ails you...

and if i find out that your words are see through...

my voice will fly away, dear christ! i am now voiceless

i am now voiceless, really voiceless

and my heart is just as dim, dear christ! i am now voiceless

quite voiceless

and i know that i am clinically disabled

but i couldn't even sing before, my babies!

put a glass to break all the happy people

all of the happy people

DATS ALL IVE GOT AND I WANT UR OPINIONS IF U DONT LIKE IT DONT SAY ANYTHING IF U LIKE IT PM ME AND I CAN WORK IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2 COPIES TO THE FIRST PERSON WHO PMS ME>>>>>

by the way, i forgot to say tha

 

It doesn't sound like a song more a poem

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SILENT LOVER

 

Hush hush touch my lips
Don’t go in for the kiss
Don’t even breathe coz’ there’s nothing more important than this
Shh shh nothing to say
Just lay quietly and play
We don’t need to talk coz’ it’s so much better this way

Silence is golden and so is your love
We could create ecstasy if we mix them up
Sweet sweet silence can speak so loud
Scream down the place, drown out the doubt

You don’t need to say anything to me; your heartbeat is what I wanna hear
You can tell me so much more by the drop of a single tear
And when you smile, you can say a thousand words
You can be my silent lover, always seen but never heard

Hush hush brush my lips
With your fingers, the tips
The heat of your caress can send me deep into bliss
Shh shh what’s to say
I could do this all day
Push me until I scream inside silently

My heart is titanium and so is your hold
You got me so tight and you ain’t lettin’ go
Grappling my soul and not making a sound
All I can hear is your touch in my head and I can’t turn it down

You don’t need to say anything to me; your heartbeat is what I wanna hear
You can tell me so much more by the drop of a single tear
And when you smile, you can say a thousand words
You can be my silent lover, always seen but never heard

Your voice ringin’ in my ears so I can’t hear the bang
Sneaking up on me from behind just because you can
And when you push your love gun right into my back
You can shoot me all you want, clickety-clack-clack

Sneaking up on me from behind, tip-toe oh so quiet
But you’re infecting my mind with all the subtlety of a riot
Looting my heart like a swashbucklin’ pirate
Heatin’ up my body like a Mediterranean climate

You don’t need to say anything to me; your heartbeat is what I wanna hear
You can tell me so much more by the drop of a single tear
And when you smile, you can say a thousand words
You can be my silent lover, always seen but never heard

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SILENT LOVER

 

Hush hush touch my lips

Don’t go in for the kiss

Don’t even breathe coz’ there’s nothing more important than this

Shh shh nothing to say

Just lay quietly and play

We don’t need to talk coz’ it’s so much better this way

Silence is golden and so is your love

We could create ecstasy if we mix them up

Sweet sweet silence can speak so loud

Scream down the place, drown out the doubt

You don’t need to say anything to me; your heartbeat is what I wanna hear

You can tell me so much more by the drop of a single tear

And when you smile, you can say a thousand words

You can be my silent lover, always seen but never heard

Hush hush brush my lips

With your fingers, the tips

The heat of your caress can send me deep into bliss

Shh shh what’s to say

I could do this all day

Push me until I scream inside silently

My heart is titanium and so is your hold

You got me so tight and you ain’t lettin’ go

Grappling my soul and not making a sound

All I can hear is your touch in my head and I can’t turn it down

You don’t need to say anything to me; your heartbeat is what I wanna hear

You can tell me so much more by the drop of a single tear

And when you smile, you can say a thousand words

You can be my silent lover, always seen but never heard

Your voice ringin’ in my ears so I can’t hear the bang

Sneaking up on me from behind just because you can

And when you push your love gun right into my back

You can shoot me all you want, clickety-clack-clack

Sneaking up on me from behind, tip-toe oh so quiet

But you’re infecting my mind with all the subtlety of a riot

Looting my heart like a swashbucklin’ pirate

Heatin’ up my body like a Mediterranean climate

You don’t need to say anything to me; your heartbeat is what I wanna hear

You can tell me so much more by the drop of a single tear

And when you smile, you can say a thousand words

You can be my silent lover, always seen but never heard

This ---> "Grappling my soul and not making a sound

All I can hear is your touch in my head and I can’t turn it down"

:legend: :legend:

Also, is there a hidden s-xual meaning? I don't know if that was deliberate or if I'm just dirty minded or something. Lol... xD

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This ---> "Grappling my soul and not making a sound

All I can hear is your touch in my head and I can’t turn it down"

:legend: :legend:

Also, is there a hidden s-xual meaning? I don't know if that was deliberate or if I'm just dirty minded or something. Lol... xD

haha it's hardly hidden :P

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Rollercoaster

I've almost completed work on 30 tracks that I'm planning on either singing on myself (gotta love technology) or getting some vocalists I know to get on there to do vocals, I haven't decided yet. But after that I'm probably going to see who wants to buy my garbage lmao

 

This is something I had in my head all day, rough draft. Something with big toms like Avril's new song or JGMAR

 

When I was young

I felt that nothing was impossible

When I was young

I felt like I could fly

When I was young

I was so unstoppable

When I was young

I never used to cry

 

But I know

That I'm older now

And I'm wiser still

Together we can make it out

All we have to do is...

 

Throw up out hands like

"I'm done with this sh1t"

Take every chance like

"I'm gonna do it"

Shout out, shout out

Raise our voices

 

Woah oh oh oh

Woah oh oh oh

Na na na naa

Na na na naa

 

Now that I'm strong

I know that nothing's impossible

Now that I'm strong

I've got something in mind

Now that I'm strong

I'm feeling super unstoppable

Now that I'm strong

I'm gonna touch the sky

 

Throw up out hands like

"I'm done with this sh1t"

Take every chance like

"I'm gonna do it"

Shout out, shout out

Raise our voices

 

Woah oh oh oh

Woah oh oh oh

Na na na naa

Na na na naa

 

When I look back and I see

I'm just a vision of me

What's inside has withered and died

I was young and so dumb

Drinking until I'm numb

Drinking until I'm numb..

 

But it was oh. So. Worth it.

 

Throw up out hands like

"I'm done with this sh1t"
Take every chance like

"I'm gonna do it"
Shout out, shout out

Raise our voices

 

Woah oh oh oh

Woah oh oh oh
Na na na naa

Na na na naa

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warhol killer

Verse 1
When the time goes by,
Nobody helped you, why?
Cause you are feeling so lonely..

As the time goes by,
You rejected me, why?
Cause you are feeling so ashamed..

Footsteps on the snow,
You can't blame me cause your so low..
Guess your sleeping the dark with this love bow..
Footprints in the sand..
You can't blame me cause your not rad,
Guess your aren't living in the bright side..

Chorus
Footsteps On The Snow,
You know I really want to know..
How your feeling today with this lonely piece of time..

Are depressed or stressed somehow,
Tell me cause I really know how..
How to fix these things with this little left of time..

Your so lovely and cool but now your just
Footsteps On The Snow

Verse 2
You cannot buy a house in the heavens,
You cannot even sleep at 7'..
Cause you are so sad..

Your feeling insecure,
So heart is not that pure..
Cause you are so bad and mad..

Footsteps on the snow,
You can't blame me cause your so low..
Guess your sleeping the dark with this love bow..
Footprints in the sand..
You can't blame me cause I'm so rad,
Guess your aren't living in the bright side..

Chorus
Footsteps On The Snow,
You know I really want to know..
How your feeling today with this lonely piece of time..

Are depressed or stressed somehow,
Tell me cause I really know how..
How to fix these things with this little left of time..

Your so lovely and cool but now your just
Footsteps On The Snow


Bridge
Easy living,
That was what you told me when we were friends..
Give you everything,
As a friend you might have not understand..
Footsteps on the snow,
Your not ready to go..
Footprints on the wind..
Guess your not living in the light anyway..

Footsteps on the snow,
You can't blame me cause your so low..
Guess your sleeping the dark with this love bow..
Footprints in the sand..
You can't blame me cause I'm so rad,
Guess your aren't living in the bright side..

Chorus:
Footsteps On The Snow,
You know I really want to know..
How your feeling today with this lonely piece of time..

Are depressed or stressed somehow,
Tell me cause I really know how..
How to fix these things with this little left of time..

Your so lovely and cool but now your just
Footsteps On The Snow

When the time goes by,
Nobody helped you, why?
Cause you are feeling so lonely..
You are just prentending by..

 

FOOTSTEPS ON THE SNOW

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