Singers, Songwriters, Producers - share YOUR music here!

[wiltedbliss 914]

:legend:

[Buoy Boy 1]

You have to go on a specific area such as 'conversation area' and there's a button at the top that says 'create new thread'.

 

I was having an argument with a Belieber once and they called me 'bios-xual'.

Thank youuu, i made a new thread in the conversation area with some of my lyrics :D and lol why? its one of my song titles thats why its my name haha

[Saint Laurent 4,862]

Thank youuu, i made a new thread in the conversation area with some of my lyrics :D and lol why? its one of my song titles thats why its my name haha

They were 11 I think they got a little confused.

 

I'll be sure to check out your songs and lyrics!

[Galactic Mess 1,393]

So... Garageband is my hobby (no, I don't have a Mac), and I absolutely love writing/singing choruses. Their production is really simple ( I made it all on iPhone/iPad), and mostly there just to indicate the pace of the song. Nevertheless, since you guys are so kind and non-judgemental ( ), I decided to post them here. I have better songs in my mind, but I'm lazy and a student so I haven't recorded them yet. 

 

Anyway, I'm excited for your feedback :)

 

1. Low: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/low

 

Lyrics:

"I ust wanna give you a chance, so when you feel (I did not record these)

 so effin' low

 You'll know to whom you should resort

 Don't worry girl

 I'll let nothing bring you under

 I'm gonna show

 Show you that not all is lost

 When you feel low brow

 Just wake up and call my number"

 

2. Midnight Lover: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/midnight-lover

 

Lyrics:

 

"Oh would you risk it

 or flee it,

 Afraid to lose your sense of home

 For I can offer you

 a freedom

 that you could never feel alone

 Will you surrender

 to the music

 I know is deep down in your heart

 I can hear the song of your body

 when our bodies are one

 from the sunset to the dawn

 

(this part I haven't recorded yet... Idk if it's good) 

And if you still wish to refuse it

 I won't force you to come

 By the daytime I'll be gone

 Just a dream that came along"

 

3. Hypnotic: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/hypnotic-2

 

Lyrics:

 

"You're so hypnotic

 can't get rid of your gaze

 Girl I feel robotic

 like a pawn inside your hands baby

 Can we get erotic

 ask it and I'll be your slave

 I can't ignore it

 I've been poisoned by your craze (3x)

 

4. Pop Lovers: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/pop-lovers

 

Lyrics:

 

"Some people say we're sick, but we just love pop music ( you know where I got this from )

 Pop pop musi-i-i-ic

 Some people say we're sick but we just love the beat

 We love this trance

 Some people might state that we dwell in insanity

 Some might call us shallow but will follow our trends

They will dance just like we dance"

 

5. Break you - instrumental: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/break-you-instrumental-1

 

Lyrics (mentally place them over the loudest part haha):

 

"I wanna save you

 Save me

 I wanna Break you

 I wanna steal and then tear to pieces what is left of your heart (heart, heart)

 I wanna be with you

 Be with me

 I wanna break you

 Break me

 Wanna consume every tear you cry until the last one falls (falls, falls)"

 

6. Last encounter: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/last-encounter

 

Lyrics (they're in a REALLY rough state [made them up like 1 hour ago], as the recording above, so try to criticize this one constructively instead of b---hing):

 

"Hey, over there

 Was it you who told me that I should be strong

 Warmed me up in the cold nights

 when I was laying there alone

 You don't seem to be the same to me

 Now that I've seen what you've become (these last two lines are really just fillers, haven't thought of real        lyrics for this part)

 I won't regret leaving you in bed

 While you kiss another one

 

But anyway I miss you

 I'm still dreaming of kissing you (same thing as the first parenthesis)

 And hearing your voice flooding my ears again

 Only your voice can soften the pain

 

 May I still hear your voice?

 Whispering how eternal is the truth in your lies

 Do I still have a choice?

 You had me on the moment I looked in your eyes"

 

 

 

 

 

 

I will keep udating the list whenever college and my creativity allow me :)

[SEVDALIZA 1,274]

Those are actually pretty good :clap: Good job :)

[Galactic Mess 1,393]

Those are actually pretty good :clap: Good job :)

Omg really? Ty!!!

[Sexxx 5,473]

Midnight Lovers is really nice, sorta reminds me of Midnight City

Hypnotic sounds very Madonna, good

Edited March 23, 2013 by Ratchet

[Jjang 2,262]

What kind of effect do you use for your voice in Garage-Band and how do you upload it on soundcloud?

[Galactic Mess 1,393]

What kind of effect do you use for your voice in Garage-Band and how do you upload it on soundcloud?

Large room + echo and reverbaration

 

Soundcloud shoul appear as one of the uploading/sharing options when you click on the "edit" button :)

[PopReaper 2,122]

I really like it!

 

My favorite is Midnight lover

[Ambrosia 3,775]

You know what I think, John.        

[Saint Laurent 4,862]

:shy:

[wiltedbliss 914]

I really like them :clap:

[Saint Laurent 4,862]

I'm really sorry, I'm just having these splurges of creativity and I feel obliged to share them with you.

 

Here it is (I haven't written a hook yet..) -

 

I'm not thinking straight
I think it may be too late
My speech is slurring
I'm in a state of not caring
You caused my depression
Left me with so much aggression 

 

I think I'm over overdosing now

And I think that you know how

(I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing)
That Barbiturate has gotten into my system
(I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing)
Don't tell them what I have done,
Just tell them that I will miss them.
(I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing.)
My heart won't die now now,
It died long ago.
(I'm over doing, I'm overdoing)

Way back then, with Marilyn Monroe.

 

 

My heart will not die
The amount that they gave me,
It just wasn't enough
And now that I've got more,
I just don't feel so rough.
The affects, I'm resisting
I'm no longer existing.

I think I'm over overdosing now
And I think that you know how

 

(I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing)
That Barbiturate has gotten into my system
(I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing)
Don't tell them what I have done,
Just tell them that I will miss them.
(I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing.)
My heart won't die now now,
It died long ago.
(I'm over doing, I'm overdoing)
Way back then, with Marilyn Monroe.

 

Thoughts?

Edited March 24, 2013 by MorphineRevenge

[BlueVenusian 5]

When I read the lyrics a trippy electro japanese song was in my head.

 

 

 

That barbiturate has gotten into my system(Yeah!)

I'm ovah-dosing, ova-dosin'