Song Concepts Help!

[Warholian 6,880]

I changed the bridge:

“Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh sticky sticky sticky BURP! uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh yeah yeah yeah yeah".

No, I don't think people will understand and some might even find it a little repetitive. Here's something I wrote today (I know it's hard to think that I can write this much in one but I'm a professional writer so you're bound to be worse, okay?)

 

" oh yes oh yes oh yes

i made a bowl of good

but then it made a flood

bat

hat

mat 

sat on the rat cat in the hat oh yes oh yes

please stop bullying

fly guy shy my my oh yes oh yes oh yes"

[Pablo 6,941]

write about society, what matters to you, art....etc

[Kermit 15,807]

I wrote a song about a demon possessing my body at the time of a climax during intercourse and slitting the throat of my lover only to have the blood spurt out his neck onto my bellybutton as a rubbed it around on my stomach and licked my fingers at the end.

 

 

I'm not lying, i'm hardcore as fck.

[President Biden 5,898]

Wow, really disrespectful. I don't work with divas. Not worth it. 

Ok then.....

[President Biden 5,898]

I wrote a lyric last Tuesday and it's about a match-made-in-heaven new couple having s-x, smoking weed, and having s-x while smoking weed. 

I wanna see it

[President Biden 5,898]

I wrote a song about a demon possessing my body at the time of a climax during intercourse and slitting the throat of my lover only to have the blood spurt out his neck onto my bellybutton as a rubbed it around on my stomach and licked my fingers at the end.

 

 

I'm not lying, i'm hardcore as fck.

Show me Ira! I wan a read this epicness 

[Kermit 15,807]

Show me Ira! I wan a read this epicness 

No one is mentally prepared for it...

 

 

 

not even the craziest person on earth.

[FrozenKookie 2,638]

I wanna see it

But the problem is i don't know you, and i kinda see this as special :/

[adamsenigma 9,520]

I wrote a song about a demon possessing my body at the time of a climax during intercourse and slitting the throat of my lover only to have the blood spurt out his neck onto my bellybutton as a rubbed it around on my stomach and licked my fingers at the end.

 

 

I'm not lying, i'm hardcore as fck.

Satanic Psycho Beings is coming.

[Kermit 15,807]

Satanic Psycho Beings is coming.

They better get ready, some hardcore experimental EDM is about to slay.

[President Biden 5,898]

They better get ready, some hardcore experimental EDM is about to slay.

Slay! Do u make ur own instrumentals? Cuz I cam write my lyrics but idk how to make edm instrumentals well.