Just Stefani Things (Monster Monthly Magazine)

[bionic 37,649]

I think this would be a better (and more sensitive) idea if you changed your plans so that these stories are simply loosely based upon Gaga's life using totally made-up characters [even if they share personality likeness to Gaga and her real life friends] with original looks (etc).

 

EDIT: And I think it'd also be better if the stories were tales of ~hope~ and ~perseverance~ through hard times rather than the doom and gloom that it seems so far. It's okay to include these negative aspects of reality in your story, but a reader will want an emotional pay-off; we want to know the characters are OK. We want to know that they were able to get the help they need to continue with their life etc. End it on a positive note with a good moral lesson (for example: people are always willing to help when you are in need)

[KyliesChild 16,907]

This isn't really okay.

I um don't think throwing Lina's death in is a really good idea.

idk, but I want this story to be intense and this was my first idea.

[AIex 3,102]

I just think its a really negative move.

[KyliesChild 16,907]

I just think its a really negative move.

Distract the others while I change it.

[AIex 3,102]

anaconda

[UC PiXELVISION 353]

Distract the others while I change it

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