Chickens in Malibu 7,873 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 So last week, I had an experience that made me very emotional and couldn't get it out of head. So I decided to write about it. I found that writing is a great way to grieve (no wonder why Taylor Swift wrote a song about every single one of her exes ) I really enjoyed the process a lot. And I'm wondering if I should pursue this hobby or even think about making it my profession if I'm very passionate about (I'm not into singing, or fame, only songwriting). What do you guys think of the attempt lyrics-wise? Should I continue working on my songwriting skills or abandon? Keep in mind english is my second language lol.. So I called it "Sorrow Times" and here's how it went:  (Verse 1) Tuesday night, I came along, Found my way to heaven just in time  Drunk On Wine, Couldn’t even recall what plan was on my mind  Broken by, Dreams of the past that never stood the test of time  Spoken by, Memories that I would rather not bear in mind  (Pre-chorus) Came for, a moment that I thought would be sublime Fell for, a swallowing maze I could never leave in time Cried for, a dead love we are never meant  to revive Sought for, relief that I knew I could never get in time  (Chorus) Sorrow Times, Follow us whenever and wherever we could go Sorrow Times, A picture of the truth that will never unfold Sorrow Times, Illusion of your love that I can see blindfold Sorrow Times… Sorrow Times  (Verse 2) You brought me to my knees Made me feel the steam, of your charm blowing up inside my mind  You made me follow a dream, That I couldn’t even see, or recall in my future lonely times  I could never see What could it ever mean To have you a shadow in my life  How could I be keen to learn to be in fear of losing your grip on my heart  (Pre-chorus) Came for, a moment that I thought would be sublime Fell for, a swallowing maze I could never leave in time Cried for, a dead love we are never meant  to revive Sought for, relief that I knew I could never get in time   (Chorus) Sorrow Times, Follow us whenever and wherever we could go Sorrow Times, A picture of the truth that will never unfold Sorrow Times, Illusion of your love that I can see blindfold Sorrow Times… Sorrow Times   Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PerfectCure 4,750 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhyllisDietrichson 105 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 My poor wig!!!!! This is SO good!! We should write together maybe! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sherlock112 717 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 You've got a Gift hon! CHROMATICA BOUGHT ME BACK! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gam 19,695 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 urggh talent lastfm - https://tinyurl.com/4x28kakr⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀steam - https://tinyurl.com/mbyp5as5 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickens in Malibu 7,873 Posted July 16, 2018 Author Share Posted July 16, 2018 1 hour ago, Lonely Lolita said: My poor wig!!!!! This is SO good!! We should write together maybe! I wish! If you write music for yourself I'd definitely help anytime! 1 hour ago, gam said: urggh talent More like grief makes you write really well haha! I mean that's how Adele wrote the best of her songs too. Or when Gaga gave us that masterpiece called The Edge Of Glory (she wrote it after her grandpa died). Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas 20,562 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 It's so beautiful! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhyllisDietrichson 105 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 24 minutes ago, nicolasrumet said: I wish! If you write music for yourself I'd definitely help anytime! More like grief makes you write really well haha! I mean that's how Adele wrote the best of her songs too. Or when Gaga gave us that masterpiece called The Edge Of Glory (she wrote it after her grandpa died). K I’ll pm u eventually Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chromatic 12,177 Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 52 minutes ago, nicolasrumet said: You brought me to my knees Made me feel the steam, of your charm blowing up inside my mind Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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