NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Hey Monsters! I'm back today with a new song. I've been working a lot on this one and it means really a lot to me because the lyrics summarize literally all my daily feelings. I hope some of y'all will relate and like it. Remember that I record with the mic of my headphones so, of course, the quality of the vocals is not great and I'd ask you to listen to it imagining what it could be with a good recording in a studio. Remember also that I do everything on my own from scratch (lyrics, instrumental, producing, mixing etc). Of course, let me know what you think about it ! Spoiler Verse 1: I see every asshole being proud I hear every whisper getting loud And I always pretend I dont care what they say So I look away And I know it won’t end It’s just another day And I fade away Chorus: I’m so tired of being insecure And you make me feel like you’re right when you lie I’m so tired of being insecure Yeah I smile but that doesn’t mean I’m alright Verse 2: I’ve been so wise I lowkey took all your wounds on me but now Though I tried and I tried, didnt you know that I couldn't get by But I found stamina and strength Through every demon you have sent At least they taught me how to contend I’ve had enough time to heal But I’ll keep scars yeah I will At least I hate you more than I hate me [Chorus] Bridge: Do not play with fire One spark will make a thunder Great you made me stronger Now it’s time to retire x2 Don't hold on Bitch I’m a time bomb Don’t hold on Bitch I’m a time bomb [Chorus] x 2 Yeah I smile but that doesn't mean I’m alright x4 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,732 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 This is amazing Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fantina 2,944 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 I ACTUALLY LIVE FOR THIS!!! The bridge is really good!!! STREAM LEGENDARY ON HBO MAX Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 5, 2018 Author Share Posted January 5, 2018 1 minute ago, littlemonsterL5 said: This is amazing thank you! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 5, 2018 Author Share Posted January 5, 2018 2 minutes ago, Fantina said: I ACTUALLY LIVE FOR THIS!!! The bridge is really good!!! I'm glad you like it thank you! !! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZiggyZiggs 29,846 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 the instrumental is pretty good Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamsenigma 9,520 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 The instrumental omg I'd love to work with you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
selenalavigne 1,256 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 The 2nd chorus builds really well and gives me chills. Good job with this one and keep writing:):) I'm a songwriter so I know how hard it can be to feel confident about your work. keep putting yourself out there. We'll support you. https://open.spotify.com/album/4yk2eQg0LdV7b3A020Desg Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 5, 2018 Author Share Posted January 5, 2018 18 minutes ago, ZiggyZiggs said: the instrumental is pretty good thank you, I worked hard on it to be as clean as possible Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RadioIsOurs 13,691 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 I think it'll be better if the vocals are an octave higher, perhaps you can try that if you can Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caothan Mcbride 643 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 SLAYY Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 5, 2018 Author Share Posted January 5, 2018 47 minutes ago, adammonroe said: The instrumental omg I'd love to work with you I love to collaborate with other people. By the way I wrote a song with someone on this cult site, and I'm dropping it late January !! DM me !!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronlop 6,783 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 This is amazing! You're super talented Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GagaEffect 876 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 This is such a bop!! queen snapped!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
UWontUseMyMind 526 Posted January 5, 2018 Share Posted January 5, 2018 Not my genre but the Bridge is a bop Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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