UrethraFranklin 434 Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 **Disclaimer It's not mixed or anything so forgive the loud/quiet parts. This is a song I'm writing for another artist and this is likely not how the final will sound even remotely but I had a lot of emotion to get out so I just went nuts with the vocals and production. Hope you at least enjoy it enough to leave your thoughts. I can't improve/grow unless I get feedback so say whatever is on your mind. Lyrics: Can you see my face, This is the way you love me now.It's not only me, I see the way you love me now.I fought for you Called for youWent 'cross the world for youYou pushed me awayI'm not brokenStill hopingHear every word spokenYou lie everydayChorus: When you see me change, it's in the way you love me nowI'm losing my faith, it's from the way you love me nowSo, this is how it endsNow don't expect a kissThis time I'm being honestYou gave me nothing, now my foot's on the brakeThis is doneI'm tired of being run downYou watched me go insaneIs the way you love someone?Giving your heart and then taking it away...Don't ask me why I'm goneIt should be obvious by nowSo go and have your funYour game is waiting to be won.You left me so stupidFought against the truthNow I've got scars to prove it.Chorus and end. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miley 5,006 Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 WOW. It blew me away! You're AMAZING! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monsterclaw 319 Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 that;s some really good **** man. I also write my songs and i really love it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrethraFranklin 434 Posted October 19, 2015 Author Share Posted October 19, 2015 WOW. It blew me away! You're AMAZING! that;s some really good **** man. I also write my songs and i really love it Thanks so much for listening It really means a lot Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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